In Moon's Spot Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

In Moon's Spot

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I find her in moon’s spot
I try to hide emotions but suddenly caught
She thinks it right
But offers no fight

I plead her to open
Petals to reopen
Adjust to my desire
Which I did admire

Let me suck
and get not struck
I leave it to no luck
But not to call it unlucky either

I want it non stop
To get on peak or top
Feel to heart’s delight
And find it right

She has silence
That robs me of chance
I wish to flow with nature
And make it sue

I wish her to be near
With no more to fear
I have promised her land
Till reach to dead end

Love demand s no caution
Yet necessary as precaution
I want it no repeat mention
As it looses charm for retention

Night may provide real blossom
We need it in open with no room
The wind may cool the land
We may feel as one true friend

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 February 2014

welcome Maricela Ramírez, Rohani Daud like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 February 2014

Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia and Lisa Lombardi like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 February 2014

Great Dillion Macias34 minutes ago I love the imagery in this Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 February 2014

Moon spot so full of wonder Lee Swires34 minutes ago I am on the journey with this one but am confused as to where it might be leading

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 February 2014

I find her in moon’s spot I try to hide emotions but suddenly caught

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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