In My Life Poem by Kev Elmer

In My Life

Rating: 4.5


A single red rose from the heart,
to show you that I care!
I know I have to wait,
beacuse it's only fair.

Your a ray of happiness,
that shines right in my life!
Your a perfect picture,
that I'll welcome in my life!

If I'm a frozen lake,
then your the midday sun!
It warms me up inside,
as I dream on whats to come.

I guess in what I'm saying,
but I do want you here!
To live on by my side,
without an ounce of fear.

I offer you my hand,
and get down on one knee!
One thing left to ask you,
'Will you be with me'?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
aeda sea 15 April 2006

full of questioning, hopefullness, anticipation, and do i sense the tiniest amount of fear in a voice thats speaking but not heard? beautiful poem

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