In My Mind Poem by ritty patnaik

In My Mind

Rating: 5.0


however much, isay
i love you
it seems not enough!
for enough! will be the day, you say
you have found,
new love again!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 11 June 2009

the short sentences plus the easy diction all through embellish this beautiful writen..10++

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Saadat Tahir 10 June 2009

ritty sounds like throwing in the towel is the degeneration of give built into the halo of endearment very provocative lines...well done cheers

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Joseph Poewhit 10 June 2009

Love can be a hurting game

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