Monday, August 31, 2009

In My Phantasm Comments

Rating: 2.4

She showered like waters from heaven
Emptied my mind for expression
Music is broken in the formulae
Galen or another sage
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Sandra Fowler 03 September 2009

Skillful use of simile and metaphor. A very emotional piece. Your creative imagination and your rich vocabulary carry the day. I give you ten. Warm regards, Sandra

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Ejaz Khan 31 August 2009

Vivid imagination, sensuous and yet classic, a good one!

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