Sunday, April 16, 2006

In That Hour Of Flowers Comments

Rating: 5.0

We were once spring lovers
Walking through lush green fields
Gathering flowers to place
In your sunlight-blonde hair.
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Uriah Hamilton
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Konjit Berhane 28 April 2006

lovely poem and spring is my favourite season so this line makes the whole poem lovely and tenderful... **KoNi**

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Hugh Cobb 16 April 2006

Dear Uriah, This is a tender and loving poem. Everything changes, but with some great fortune, two hearts can accept one another's changes and maintain, but many more cannot and change at different rates, resulting in relationships such as the one you mourn here: Well-written, heart-centered and compassionate. Best, Hugh

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Allan James Saywell 16 April 2006

yes flowers in the spring flowers in the fall, flowers that seem to call young lovers into a secret room where they embrace only God knows why Elvis

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Sonny Rainshine 16 April 2006

Perfect hours of flowers like that do seem very slippery and transient, don't they? Guess that's why we have to enjoy them right then and there and not think too much about that 'sepia autumn' (beautiful metaphor) that's right around the corner. Enjoyed it a lot.

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Sandra Fowler 16 April 2006

There are hours that shine forever in the landscapes of the mind..Lovely poem.. Kind regards, Sandra

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