In The Dark Comments

This one takes my breath away...it's lovely and flows so smoothly Hugs, dee

There's a lovely rippling effect that carries the reader smoothly through this. Clever, intricately formed poem with a clinker of an exit couplet. best, jim

These are all things that I wish I could find many times not just in my dreams in the dark but most especially that they would permanently stay in my heart....nice poem here, lots of emotion..............marci.m. :)