Thursday, March 8, 2018

In The End Comments

Rating: 5.0

Last time I did not wave at you.
The lily of love between you and me
Has weathered away. Petals have gone
Dry one by one and fell to the ground.
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Bipasha D 08 March 2018

I liked the way the poem is written, with images from nature. Definitely deserves 10

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 March 2018

Thanks for review. Gratitude.

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Nudershada Cabanes 08 March 2018

When love between two people simmers down the warmth is replaced by cold and all feelings die slowly and withers away like petals falling.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 March 2018

My heartfelt thanks sir for giving time.

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