Tuesday, October 16, 2007

In The House Of My Home Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here, in the rooms
of my childhood

I, an adult now
...
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Dónall Dempsey
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Dee Dee Wright 24 October 2007

Beautiful...simply beautiful! Such simple observation...how the things and places of our childhood shrink when we go back...what appeared great is tiny now. And that last bit about the opening door broke my heart and the spacing of the you...me is just wonderful! Superb stuff! love Dee Dee

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Ray Lucero 16 October 2007

Donall, You are one fine poet my gifted friend. Peace, Ray

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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