In The Market Place Poem by uchenna nnodum

In The Market Place

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I hear the honk of a horn
Amid the echo of voices.
A new day had been born
And for people to make their choices.

I see a young child carrying something on his head
But to my dismay he looked under fed
Like that of a pregnant woman he had a conspicuous belly
I thought what was on his head was a bit heavy

Again i hear the clang of a bell
As i make my way through
Jostling one another like in hell
But cannot believe it is true

i see so many indifferent faces
May be because of the scourging sun
And chatting before are ladies
Pretending nothing is going on

For what i see
Has been for ages long
And will always be
As long as there is the day long.

Monday, July 20, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: voices
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Atara Feildsofrainbows 05 October 2009

Some of the tenses could be fixed and this could be a little smoother, but over all this is quite a moving work.

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Rovert Nworb 20 July 2009

I can see it in my head, well done

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