cortez mccall

Rookie (october 2 / oklahoma city oklahoma, USA)

In To Deep! - Poem by cortez mccall

In to Deep

I knew it could happen
But I never thought It would
Hear I lie in the street.
Hear on the pavement
I lay blood running out
Of me from every side
I hear the police siren
Screaming in the night of this
Incident long over do..
I think back to how
many foot soldiers I sent out that got killed.. How
Many I laid to rest on this
Same cold black battle field.
Different ones indeed come around me.Cryin and screaming baby you
Ok! asking man can you breath? I think
To my self what kind of questions are these.
I can't even see I my vision blurd. im soaked in blood my vision blured the police rush in
Quick an ready to see my end..
To finally be ride of the kingpen of these streets the man they don't
Want theirs sons and daughters
To like. This iswhat every parent
Hates. This is what they fear.
This is what dreams are made of
And why they stress why the worry!
And as I close my eyes and quench
My breath I can only think back to
What I could of done what I shoul have
Done but didn't..


Comments about In To Deep! by cortez mccall

  • Adam Reed (1/26/2010 2:26:00 AM)


    not bad senor. very suitable title and i like the whole antagonistic point of view. its catchy =) (Report) Reply

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  • (1/26/2010 1:10:00 AM)


    its
    a
    pretty
    good
    poem
    hey check out my poemsss im new to this
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 2, 2010


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