In Touch With Nature Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

In Touch With Nature

Rating: 5.0


A sun-set can I see, nor the moon-rise,
Nor, with a sun-rise, moons melting from eyes,
Nor in these tall towers a smiling star,
The blinding lights my eyesight do when mar,
Seeing hundred feet far be when much too far,
When trees are felled daily by a dozen,
When only bird I see is poor pigeon,
How in touch with Nature can I then be?
When I must look down, watch where I walk by,
How can I marvel at the open sky?
Save me from tripping o'er an unpaved stone
On roads, many a pothole-manhole prone;
When stumbling blocks all over here bemoan,
How much of Mother Nature can I see?
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Tongue-in-cheek | 10.03.2017 |

Saturday, February 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: city,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
One must live in touch with nature. Fine, but how much of nature has been left in most cities, when every inch has been occupied by tall towers, with concrete jungle all around? This piece makes a lost cry.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 03 February 2019

Thank you Rose Marie, you took time to write twice about this poem. As to your 'great poet' should I call it poetic exaggeration/excess?

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2019

A marvelous poem. Perceptive and with a meaningful message. Well crafted and conveyed.10++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2019

The wonders and joys of nature must be enjoyed by everyone. But nature has been sacrificed in the name of development. I agree with the great Poet, one must live in touch with nature.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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