Thursday, July 30, 2015

In Waiting Comments

Rating: 4.8

My eyes are still wide open to see
My beloved your charming beauty
Your beauty makes me in waiting
Definitely this chance is so satiating
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Edward Kofi Louis 30 July 2015

Come and sooth my painful eyes! With the muse of your sweet love. Nice work.

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Roseann Shawiak 30 July 2015

Beautiful and heartfelt poem Col. Saddened pleasure of love, hoping to be loved in return. Gentle rhythm and perfect timing, love the imagery of your feelings and emotions. Great poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Abbottabad Pakistan
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