Gathering my thoughts
In words and moves
I'll sing and dance
In Your presence.
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We observe rhythmic thoughts and we feel every breath in this expressive attitudes. Moving forward with footsteps of God we feel truly glad. This poem is excellent devotional poem. This deserves full 10.
Our thoughts gather automatically when we hear about God. You have greatly expressed your lovely thoughts in this poem. We feel your greatness.
Beautiful poem in its devotional intensity and its spontaneous flow and ease of narration! Yes, everything beautiful in Nature reminds us of the beauty and love inherent in God! A 10