Incomplete Poem by Pranesh Varan

Incomplete



my soul is tormented
with a lil bit of agony
and a lil bit of despair
it's been so long since i stepped outside
the world seems different now
cold, brutal, withdrawn and isolated
buried under sheer bitterness
i feel like i'm chocking and devoid of breath
people seem to walk about the town
with broken souls plenty abound
sanity and vanity now, lost forever
heralds a harsh message that
the world around me is dead
-they just dont know it yet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jean Dament 06 January 2011

There does seem to be a sadness surrounding us these days; as your poem indicates. I guess we are all feeling oppressed. I noticed this at Christmastime; as the joy & spirit of Ch just wasn't there this year. We can each do our part though in trying to be cheerful; as one person can make a difference. Thanks for sharing. A well written & insightful poem. Spiritsong

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