Friday, May 2, 2008

Indian Rainbow Comments

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The dhuppatta of the Indian angel
Sprawling over there far in the ether
A half-saree rather arched providential
Seven coloured, a shamiana-splendour
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Indira Renganathan
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The dhuppatta in ether plumes Emoting the angel's attributes And the angel is like the lotus Sunken wedded in the sun's bliss Her dhuppatta too, look, with her in sinks... ruely beautiful feelings. masterly mind with perfect accuracy..... very good i wrote'Colour' depicting rainbow. read if u like it

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 21 May 2009

wonderful! ! ! what an amazingly embroidered words! ! ! dear, friend. if time permits. please, read and comment on my seven new poems on sea and other six poems on sea. thank you very much. have nice adventurous days there! ! ! Choir of Coral (page 7) Fish Dialogues (page 8) Flee to Sea (page 8) Leaf Wave (page 11) Luminous Boat (page 12) Mysterious Depth (page 13) Sea’s Sunset (page 16) A Rhyme of A Mariner (page 3) A Voyage to A Dreadful Edge (page 4) Bay Song (page 6) Hommage à Japonaiserie (page 9) Lighthouse In You (page 11) Sonatina Oceania (page 16)

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the dresses of indian woman are the most colorful i think...though the half saree has almost become extinct...a lovely tradition in dresses we have

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