Tuesday, August 16, 2011

Indian Summer Comments

Rating: 5.0

The brash humidity is gone,
The frost giant's children,
Came to visit in the night.
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William Jackson 16 August 2011

I like the 3 line stanzas, the crisp descriptions, the metaphor, and your use of personification. Great poem.

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Juan Olivarez

Juan Olivarez

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