Indifference (2) Poem by RIC BASTASA

Indifference (2)

Rating: 2.1


you say you love
you say you want to make love
tonight or early morning
you propose it like a theory of the universe
over a cup of tea
you extend a hand to hold another hand
you tempt about luscious desire
something so sweet
and juicy and warm
you hear nothing
a hand sets aside another hand
unable to hold
nothing is spoken
you hear footsteps leaving
no hand waving
you get the point of what is indifference
no one's intent to hurt
just that there is nothing taken and there is nothing given

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yose Alba 29 November 2009

The fourth and fifth lines made my day. Keep on writing. I like your style, you can play around with some humor and make something beautiful.

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Jack Williams 29 November 2009

I love the fourth and fifth lines!

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