Sunday, November 29, 2009

Indifference (2) Comments

Rating: ★2.1

you say you love
you say you want to make love
tonight or early morning
you propose it like a theory of the universe
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RIC BASTASA
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Yose Alba 29 November 2009

The fourth and fifth lines made my day. Keep on writing. I like your style, you can play around with some humor and make something beautiful.

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Jack Williams 29 November 2009

I love the fourth and fifth lines!

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