Saturday, October 19, 2013

Inner Child Comments

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There's a child
In every person
Who's up early
And explores the universe
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla
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Marvin Brato 23 October 2013

Very interesting write, very endearing!

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Valsa George 21 October 2013

There is a child within each one of us, so sprightly and agile, so full of curiosity and wonder waiting to leap out from our tired and aged bodies. It is this child within that brings a twinkle into our eyes and gives suppleness to our limbs occasionally! An enjoyable read. For this beautiful write you deserve full marks!

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Heather Wilkins 20 October 2013

a beautifully written poem full of truth. Sometimes the body has a difficult time time keeping up with the mind.

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