Tuesday, August 4, 2020

Inner Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Darkness devours the flesh of light,
And it slowly corrodes the soul.
As secretive as starless nights,
It conjures up the icy cold,
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Shaun Cronick 05 August 2020

Very Poeish beginning that starts darkly dripping with menace with a hint of angst, then equally turns to a test of character and one's inner strength. Nicely written Dominic and a full score.10+ and well deserved. And I did one a while back nearly similar but darker called The Judder Man based on the Metz advert. You might enjoy if you remember the great ad. Many thanks Dominic and keep writing.

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