Inner Darkness Poem by DM W

Inner Darkness

Rating: 5.0


Darkness devours the flesh of light,
And it slowly corrodes the soul.
As secretive as starless nights,
It conjures up the icy cold,
And steals all of our noble dreams.
I has to be confronted boldly
And not allowed to plot and scheme.
From its prisons, we must be free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 05 August 2020

Very Poeish beginning that starts darkly dripping with menace with a hint of angst, then equally turns to a test of character and one's inner strength. Nicely written Dominic and a full score.10+ and well deserved. And I did one a while back nearly similar but darker called The Judder Man based on the Metz advert. You might enjoy if you remember the great ad. Many thanks Dominic and keep writing.

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