Kevin Patrick

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Inner Natures - Poem by Kevin Patrick

Brave as a chicken, honest as a fox
Pretty as a pigeon slender like a hippo
Big as a mouse, proud as a trought
Fast as a turtle, patient like a flee
Cruel as a dove sagacious as the snake
Kind Like a Bear deadly as a sheep
Born as a lamb raised like a lion
Friendly as a dog donating a manger
Curious as a cat with nine lives to spare
Foolish as horse with a gift of fruit cake
Cool as a leopard striped of his stripes
Warm as a whale with really sharp teeth
Happy as a fish dissecting a yuppie
Proud like a pig whose mud is his pearls
Sweet as a skunk with the charm of a wasp
Good like a man when he shares with his brother

Topic(s) of this poem: animals, simple


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A bit of a simplistic childish piece, but its what I was thinking at the time.

Comments about Inner Natures by Kevin Patrick

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/11/2016 2:57:00 PM)


    The charm of a wasp! Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/24/2015 5:40:00 PM)


    Sweet as a skunk with the charm of a wasp
    Good like a man when he shares with his brother....Very wise and interesting poem shared with reality. Amazing...10
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 24, 2015



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