Saturday, November 25, 2017

Inner Struggle Comments

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I look away when I'm afraid,
Turn the cheek when I'm betrayed,
I hold it in when anger swells,
Trapped inside my self-imposed hell,
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Holmes Jim
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2017

It is beautiful poem on emotion and fear having stunning expression and nice diction. I quote........ I hide away my hidden fears, And wipe away departed tears, I need to calm my anguished self, And set my sorrows on a shelf, Thank u dear jim for sharing a meaningful poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 November 2017

A beautiful write about emotion. Fear is clearly drawn and the drive to overcome it.. 10

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Lodigiana Poetess 25 November 2017

I hide away my hidden fears, And wipe away departed tears, Thank you so much for sharing...and ending on a positive note! loved it ...10... Lodigiana Poetess x

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