Tuesday, July 30, 2013

Inner Universe Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dark dimensional realm.
Scary endless void.
Forever remain distracted.
From the fear of losing oneself in deeper thought.
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Jordan Dumer
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Jemima Rivas 30 July 2013

I think this poem is really inspirational and it has a nice rhythmic flow to it. Keep up the wonderful work!

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Dave Walker 30 July 2013

A great poem, some people just get caught in the trap of tv and games, then they find it hard to change their ways. A great write.

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