Insanity Poem by Kayla Nace

Insanity

Rating: 5.0


Pierce my heart before this pounding stops
Allow me to feel this pain before i go completely numb
Let me live so i may die
Let me posses that maddening beauty
Before my universe fades

Painfully tear apart this veil
Set free the intoxicating unrestrained restraint
Let me bleed so i may feel
Let me become suffering exquisitely
Taste you fingers one last time

Make me cry out to the brilliant darkness
Drive me to insanity kinder than sanity
Let me sleep and never wake
Let me transform to dazzeling horrific
And give me rest till i must rise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shekhar Joshi 01 July 2009

that's exquisitely done........you stringed the words together in a wonderful way.........the line i liked most(though i liked all of it) is 'Let me live so i may die'...... excellent work......... ;) .......

0 0 Reply

I like how it all comes togeather. Nicely done: -)

0 0 Reply
Tyease Collins 28 June 2009

I love the wrd 'dazzling' it's simply ravishing =] beautiful job -Tyease

0 0 Reply

hmmmm....interesting... i like. thanks for sharing

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Kayla Nace

Kayla Nace

memoril hospital
Close
Error Success