When Will This War Be Over? Poem by Kayla Nace
When Will This War Be Over?
Trees guide me on the trail of hope.
Stars teach me the way of life.
The ocean dances with the peace on earth.
Night dreams of all the wars to be over.
The moon tells me it will be all right.
The mountains listen as i cry for war to be over.
I wonder when this war will be over?
All those mothers may never see their sons, and all those
kids may never see their dads again.
Some men and women will never come home.
The clouds cry for me because my dad almost went over to fight, but came home to my sister, my brother, my mother, and me.
Great imagery and description. This is a great poem. There is a lot of maturity in this, your writing is great. I wonder this too.
this poem is a poem in which people of all ages can relate whether they have fam in the war or not.Very touching i truly love it
i hope and pray that this war will be over soon too. good job
Kayla - You instinctively know in your heart how humanity is meant to live, in peace and harmony. Keep your expectations, and hold on........ for all our dear lives. Best wishes dear one - Cheryl
the comforting nature is beautifully depicted...hats off to you dear....keep writing....
An amazing poem that anyone and everyone can relate to. It speaks of mature thinking and has a lot of emotion that everyone can sympathize with. GREAT POEM! ! ! !
oh very touching piece dear Lil fren! beautifully written matured thought out 10+++++ and A++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Trees guide me on the trail of hope. Stars teach me the way of life. The ocean dances with the peace on earth. good lines. war is a sad thing but it happens. but the Soldiers are the reason we are free and freedom dont come free. it all comes with a price. good job. Becca