Insecure Love Poem by ritika vineeta

Insecure Love

Rating: 5.0


Will you hold my hand, if I reach to you?
Will you hear if I shall call?
Many a times we will be far away,
Will you miss my presence at all? ?

Will you think of me, if I am gone?
Will you come and hug, if my arms stretch out?
In a small moment the hour would change,
Will you remember me, I have a doubt?

Will you crack a joke, to make me smile?
Will you slap me, if I am wrong?
Being near and far is the way to live
Will you give me hope, when I need to be strong?

Will you come to me, if I shout for help?
Will you hold me tight, if I fall?
I am all alone in the midst of this mob,
Will you be by my side, when darkness calls? ?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
anurag duggal 24 May 2009

nice poem...its a good description of missing someone

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Shekhar Joshi 24 May 2009

reminds me of this enrique song...hero.... your poem is more like a song but yeah its different from tht 1 good one

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Lucid and lovely, like it.

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K. V. Venkataramana 02 April 2008

Truly an impressive write. Keep writing more and more and spread cheer all around.

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Sreelekha Premjit 17 February 2008

well said, liked ur simple yet evocative style, thanks

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