Inside Poem by Kaitlyn Garlick

Inside

Rating: 5.0


I sit listening as you mock me
I smile when it's needed
I laugh when it's appropriate
I please your every need when you need it
I cry when no-one is looking
I sit dead and cold inside
I feel the little pieces of my heart breaking off into my soul


I run and hide when you say I'm weak
Only for you to follow and say if I'm cutting it proves how weak I am
The next day is when I appear
Tear streaks on my face... Eyes puffy and red
I wish you knew, wish you understand
What I'm feeling deep inside....

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'm picked on everyday by my brother and kids at school for how I chose to cope with my emotional pain...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lucifera Santez 01 December 2013

first of all, you are an amazing poet. for your age i guess its very good, exceptional piece. girl at your age, i hadn't even started to think about writing. and you have got talent, explore it. and trust me, when i say its gonna be okay. please read some of my poems and comment. :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 December 2013

very nice.full of emotion it flows nice.liked it.

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