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I try so hard to be perfect
but perfect isn't good enough
I've tried to hard, and I've given
up hope. I will leave this world,
boom, click, POW.
I pulled the trigger with no
regrets, life is too hard to live
without being as perfect as a human
gets. I open my arms to suicide
to death. and smile upon the ones
thou shall miss

Rosey Scouthethern

Wednesday, July 4, 2012

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This poem, I wrote at about 4.30 this morning, so it needs a lot of work, but I was having a night mare, and I kept on hearing this poem being repeated. I know it needs a lot more work, but before I forget it, I needed to write it down.
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Abdallah Gamal 23 August 2012

Yoy better finish it, , it'll look amazing, and choose the right end for your poem, cuz give up and suicide are not good, , I'm sorry if my comment was so harsh :) Glad to read your poems :)

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