Inside My Soul Poem by Victoria Tori
Inside My Soul
It's like living in hell.
Constant torture
Gruesome smells.
Death paints the
Never ending walls of
My soul.
Desperation to escape,
Scratches carved in the walls.
Echoing screams of
Dyeing prey
Come from every corner.
All hopes of being free
Fades with every second I spend here.
Fear creeps upon me,
I run every which way I can,
Running into dead ends.
Losing myself with every wrong turn I make.
Panicking, covered in the darkness of death.
Evil lurking over my shoulder,
Laughing at me.
Crawling on the ground,
Weeping in fear.
Black silhouettes attacking me
Cutting me with their
Long jagged nails.
Digging into my wounded skin,
Feeding off my painful cries.
Laying still on the ground,
Like a lifeless corpse.
My body throbbing with
Excruciating pain...........
(i'm not done with this poem yet, but this is all i have at the moment, so i'll updat it soon)
It is nice, needs some work but its getting there... e.i. There is an error in line 19, it should be Evil lurking around me or Evil lurking around my shoulder :) Good write...
I'm loving it so far, this is going to be a masterpiece I can feel by this fantastic opener, that it's going to dazzle...........keep bouncing those lines out Tori....your work is a force on its own...good luck with the rest...I'm looking forward to reading this poem through to it's end... Best of Health & Happiness Jon
I love the way you express yourself... your not like everyone else...you do something different...i love it so far..keep up the good work
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 8:40:16 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Wow, splendid performance from my u Vicky, i love, i have enjoyed it, i have learned from it.Nice, well organised, well phrased, well said and magnificent expression. GREAT WRITE FROM U, KEEP IT UP. I SALUTE U.