Insomnia Poem by Anderson Green

Insomnia

Rating: 4.3


Oh, how I cannot sleep
the constant way I lay
it keeps me up
I cannot sleep

Noises all around
Cannot close my eyes
the harder I try, I fail
It has been five days

My wife wonders why I cannot sleep
She says, 'I toss and turn'
I agree
I have started to see things

I hardly eat
My wife thinks that I am ill
I agree
It has been nine days

No soul outside the wall of my mind
could trouble me
I can never walk out
I went to the doctors

They say that there is no wrong in me
I struggle home
wife sits in grief
she crys

I ask why she cried
she looks at me
she cries even more
then she hugged me, first time in ages

I lay in bed
I am still tired
I closed my eyes, finally
I smiled, I was finally happy.

My wife stood in the door
Tears keep going down her face
but with an undertone she said
'Goodbye, My love.'

Monday, March 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An man who is dying due to insomnia but instead is greatly ill
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anderson Green 16 March 2015

Thank you Mr. David Walker

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Anderson Green 16 March 2015

Thank you David walker I appreciate the gracious word you bestowed in the comments. The real thing is I am only 18 with no poetry training, the things I write are purely inspiration.

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Dave Walker 16 March 2015

A powerful poem, and will be so true for a lot of people who suffer from insomnia. A great write.

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