Friday, June 5, 2009

Insomnia's Call Comments

Rating: 5.0

A ticking clock,
I wish it would stop.
Counting sheep,
Yet I still can’t sleep.
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Pauline McVicar
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Adi Cox 05 July 2009

I like the line: 'Take me to a place where all my dreams dwell' Only insomnia could lead you to imagine such a place. This is a well written poem about a universal problem that affects most people at some time in their lives.10/10.

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sky dreams 05 June 2009

this poem is amazing.. i suffer from insomnia and face the same thoughts reflected in this poem.. you portrayed the emotions in this poem perfectly. great write! !

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