Insomniac Nights Poem by Muhammad Imtiyaz

Insomniac Nights

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Sleep is an imitation of death
But that death I didn't cherish since months.
A fairy snatched even the short naps.
A figure she is always flashing across the eyes
The one with beauties of seven heavens mingled, none symbols of beauty can define her.
She is but life in itself.
And mine being insomniac is nothing but rendezvous with life.
I am being insomniac but self centered.
'None can replace you but only you'

Saturday, July 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Imtiyaz 07 February 2018

Thaks everybody for your valuable comments

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 February 2018

A fairy snatched even the short naps. A figure she is always flashing across the eyes..beauty, attraction, infatuation, passion, emotion, sleepless nights. no one can but u alone............thank you for this passionate poem....... tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 March 2016

She is but life in itself. Thanks for sharing.

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Denis Mair 25 February 2016

Your sleepless night is a rendezvous with life, which is her. This is a good way of describing a session of thoughts about the beloved. The line of scripture you quote makes me think that a sleepless night can be a confrontation with one's own immortal soul.

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 25 February 2016

Thank you very much sir for your valuable comment...

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 25 February 2016

Thank you very much sir for your valuable comment....

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M Asim Nehal 28 January 2016

Nicely thought and written...10+++

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 28 January 2016

thanks a lot

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