Inspiration Poem by Maropene Makgoba

Inspiration

Rating: 3.3


Looking into the future with a gladdened heart
Pulling things together, not easy but smart
Why dwell on the sorrows of my heart
If I've decided, never from my hopes shall I depart?

Pushing me each day to stay on the right path
Can never go astray now why would I do that?
Is this the beginning of an emotional dead end?
I do believe it's a body and mind blend

Call it crazy call it insane
This is the only way to let go of failures pain
Out of joy my heart extremely pounds
That's what I like to call inspirations sound

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes we dwell on how hard we have fallen or on the mistakes which we've made, forgetting that life still goes on and there is much more to live for. So why not look forward to a better tomorrow!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Round 03 August 2012

Quite a nice one... but I have a problem with punctuation... failures pain - failure's pain inspirations sound - inspiration's sound

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