Into The Wild Poem by Xelam Kan™

Into The Wild



The sitting sun, wrestling
with the clouds, and
kindles the sky
with pale reds; and snaps
her glory, loitering in the wild.

But i see winters in
her smiles, often synced in tears.
O, this world is like a belly
of beast, spouting acid
into love and peace.

The time crept by
slowly, still her innocence
trances my dreams. And I
can hear her whisperings endlessly
walk on the barren moors.

Saturday, December 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: romance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 01 March 2016

yes, it does sound like romantic poetry. and now that i see i already left a comment, i'll move to read another. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 26 December 2014

a delicious first stanza. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - kin·dle1 ˈkindl/ verb verb: kindle; 3rd person present: kindles; past tense: kindled; past participle: kindled; gerund or present participle: kindling light or set on fire. synonyms: light, ignite, set alight, set light to, set fire to, put a match to he kindled a fire antonyms: extinguish, douse arouse or inspire (an emotion or feeling) . a love of art was kindled in me synonyms: rouse, arouse, wake, awake, awaken; More stimulate, inspire, stir (up) , excite, evoke, provoke, fire, inflame, trigger, activate, spark off; literar ywaken, enkindle the Beatles kindled my interest in music (of an emotion) be aroused. she hesitated, suspicion kindling within her synonyms: rouse, arouse, wake, awake, awaken; More - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - what an interesting word! i guess i never heard it used in the sense of the first definition, though i've heard of kindling wood (a noun, referring to small pieces of wood used to start a fire) ........... years ago when i was more apt to be near a campfire or fireplace. actually i think kindling (used as a verb) would be more consistent in the stanza than kindles. :) ==================== the sun is SOOO big (and hot) that i won't argue if it wants to be sitting, but i wonder if john meant 'setting'. what about it, John, my friend? ? :) and does: and snaps her glory, loitering in the wild. ...............refer to snapping a photograph of the glory of the sky? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - so, the Earth has heartburn and THAT evolves into love and peace? ! that would be nice. i especially like whisperings endlessly. thanks for sharing. bri :)

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 26 December 2014

A beautifully done poem.I enjoyed it Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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