Sunday, December 7, 2014

Invariable Comments

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Invariable
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Then and thereupon
I turned and found you
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Salini Nair 08 December 2014

First, pure and unmixed Holding on to till today Warm, true and placid Onward and sublime........................nice work....

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Akhtar Jawad 07 December 2014

My law of of life states- Life varies directly to the love. Life varies inversely to the hate. Life = A Constant of Proportionality x (Love / Hate) The Constant of Proportionality is God. Your poem is lovely and nice.........10

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