Invisible Poem by tanesha davenport

Invisible

Rating: 4.8


invisible she lay
not seen by day
invisible to the sight and touch
if she died no one would care much
an ocean of darkness filled her heart
she could no longer feel her soul was dark
fear was no longer there
if it did hurt she didnt care
invisible blood flooded the floor
the pain felt good she wanted more
cutting her wrist with an invisible knife
each cut inch by inch slowly taking her life
the ocean of darkness soon ran dry
as the invisible girl wrote her last goodbyes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rosalita Fernandez 11 March 2009

Brilliant- not much more i can say but truely brilliant

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Xy-za Dile 11 March 2009

this goes to my faves! beautiful write my dear =)

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Ana Guerrero 07 March 2009

Well I can also relate to this one. I think it could be longer yet you said a lot. Great job

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