Sunday, June 25, 2017

Invisible Behind The Curtain Comments

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Listening to the world go by,
Knowing what time, it is,
As parents take their children to school,
Excited about their day ahead,
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Sheila Mitchell
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Dr Antony Theodore 26 June 2017

Do they know I am here? Would they care, Invisible behind the curtain, Sharing their laughter, Recognisi ng some voices, Imagining Lovers, sharing, Beautiful singing How many are invisible behind curtains? Very painful situation you are potraying in the depths. The reader begins to fell your painful thoughts. The future, the love you seek, how does care for me. Love this poem for conveying the facts of real life in pathetic situation…….. thank you.you are portraying the situation of many. tony

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Chinedu Dike 25 June 2017

Beautiful rendition of words in an insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly brought forth with conviction. The feeling of isolation in a life at its lowest ebb is aptly captured in the poem. Thanks for sharing Sheila.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 June 2017

I hide under the covers! ! Because of the evil acts of mankind. But, hope lies ahead of you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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