Irony Of Love Poem by Judith Punzalan

Irony Of Love

Rating: 5.0


I hate it when you say you care
but it doesn't seem at all
I hate it when I lose all air
because I always fall
I hate it when you make me smile
like there is no tomorrow
I hate it when I walk a mile
like the next day will never show
I hate it when you make my day
the way you did before
I hate it when I lose my way
Like there's no open door
and most of all I hate it when I say I hate all this..
but deep inside me all of those, I just truly miss..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 03 June 2009

Hate but miss, nice but touching...10+++

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Ency Bearis 30 September 2008

intriguing but great verses.. well penned... Ency Bearis

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Judith Punzalan 30 September 2008

aww thank you guys =]

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Manonton Dalan 30 September 2008

hate is very strong word but most of the time you really don't mean it. i can't recall hating anybody but dislike their behavior, i do. very lovely poem. thanks md.

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Andrew James 29 September 2008

sad and beautiful... thanks for sharing

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