Is It Real? ? Poem by anel prince

Is It Real? ?

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sitting alone
a dark room
thinking of what happened
dreaming of what should've happened.
lost in a world unjust
loosing all hope of returning
waiting for you to say: 'i'm sorry'
do i have to worry?
six months have elapsed
was it real?
was i dreaming?
i'm i lost again? ...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aijaz Asif 07 November 2008

yes joe is right, patience surely is virtue....this poem is very beautiful a bit dark with deep thoughts and you surely have the talent to turn feelings into words, keep writting..thanks 10

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Joseph Poewhit 07 November 2008

Patience is a virtue

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