Wednesday, October 7, 2020

Is There Another Word? Comments

Rating: 4.5

Is there another word?
That can replace goodbye
If there is
I'd like to give it a try
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Ray Hansell
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 October 2020

Goodbye seems to be final and ending but it is the starting point of emotion and memory. A perceptive mind feels this sequence better. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned...5 stars..

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George Krokos 07 October 2020

How about " farewell" . BTW the first word on the second line of the second verse should be spelt as " Too" . Regards and greetings - George K.

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