Saturday, May 9, 2009

Isn'T It Strange...? Comments

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In daylight we hurry
towards the night
hiding who we truly are
From everyone
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Afzal Shauq
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Maria Barbara Korynt 04 October 2009

In your poem is finding a lot of truth. Most often, the civilization is extorting our behaviours and probably therefore in the day we are different. We are assuming the poses suitable for the situation in which we will be. Night, dream, nightmares, it is other world... Interesting poem, is provoking to reflections and discussion which certainly would be interesting. (10v.) Very good poem. Maria Barbara Korynt

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Silent Speaker 15 August 2009

An EXTREMELY moving, wonderful, and terrific poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Definetly one of my favorites.

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hiding who we truly are From everyone Even ourselves --> very true verses! ! ! amaziiiiing! ! ! Philosophical poem! ! ! I like it so much… it seems extracted from a deep meditation… people are frightened of themselves, but they forgot that we have a GOD… wherever they go, wherever they walk, wherever they move, HE watch them, HE observe them, He discern them…

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Afzal Shauq

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