Thursday, October 15, 2015

It Only Takes You Comments

Rating: 4.5

It only takes you to make me smile,
Convince me to drive a thousand miles,
Wait for hours, though you said 'just a while',
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Jayson C
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Chinedu Dike 26 October 2015

A very romantic and beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. A lovely depiction of voyage of bliss. I like the rhyme scheme of the piece. Thanks for sharing Jayson. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Jayson C 26 October 2015

thanks for the comment Sir Dike, appreciate it!

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Janice Jolan 15 October 2015

Nice poem of you jason, i like this line even if that fades, i'd still love you

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Jayson C 16 October 2015

Thanks for the comment! That's also my favorite line on this poem!

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