It Only Takes You Poem by Jayson C

It Only Takes You

Rating: 4.5


It only takes you to make me smile,
Convince me to drive a thousand miles,
Wait for hours, though you said 'just a while',

It only takes you to drive me insane,
The whole day you're in my brain
In my heart it's still you that reigns

It only takes you to complete me
The way you smile while looking at me,
The way you touch and kiss me,
And your 'I love you's that chills me.

Your soft voice when you whisper in my ear,
The feeling that I always want you near,
When I hug you everything seems so clear
And even if that fades, I know that's what you fear
I'd still love you so don't you worry, dear.

Thursday, October 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heart,love,relationship,sad,sweet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 26 October 2015

A very romantic and beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. A lovely depiction of voyage of bliss. I like the rhyme scheme of the piece. Thanks for sharing Jayson. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Jayson C 26 October 2015

thanks for the comment Sir Dike, appreciate it!

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Janice Jolan 15 October 2015

Nice poem of you jason, i like this line even if that fades, i'd still love you

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Jayson C 16 October 2015

Thanks for the comment! That's also my favorite line on this poem!

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