It's A Shame....? Poem by elysabeth faslund

It's A Shame....?

Rating: 5.0


It might be a poem,
But it don't rythme.
Way too wordy! Not
Worth a dime....

The beggar, who reads,
Might find worth...
If only it would rythme!
Value is mirth...

Glee will bring fortune!
Glee will bring fame!
Beggars will feast
On the meaning of

This shame
Of a poem!
Way too wordy,
And, complete

With no name!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 19 February 2008

when the excellence being resourced from wisdom rythm seems to ingrained ever along, great poem! 0+, thanks for sharing

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Robert Howard 11 February 2008

What a fun ride! Elysabeth should open a poetry theme park!

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Broken Peaces 10 February 2008

Excellent write wordy and worthy of top marks Chris

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Oh... I am begging. t x

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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