Jamal Hamadani

Rookie - 153 Points (May 29,1998 / Windsor, ON Canada)

It's About The Way You Stare At Me - Poem by Jamal Hamadani

It's about your glare
And how you sit there in silence
And stare

It's about how you smile
And share your happiness across to me

About your voice and how it satisfies me
It helps me grow
Peaceful

My mind may be jumbled and lost
But when I feel your touch
I am in the right place
I'm home

It's about how your voice speaks to me
When you are away
Just about the way you smile at me
When you lay
I love you

I will cherish you until the very end
So be sure we spend
As much time together
Because when my day comes for me to pass
I want to see your eyes
And hold your hand
And hear you speak
Until my hand falls weak
Stay with me

Be sure you move on my love
Spread your wings and fly
I do love you more and more everyday
But after I'm gone

I Want You To Soar Even Higher

Topic(s) of this poem: love, respect, sadness

Form: Occasional Poem


Poet's Notes about The Poem

It's about the way the girl I loved glared into my eyes. It's about how it made me feel everytime.

Comments about It's About The Way You Stare At Me by Jamal Hamadani

  • Drtony Brahmin (1/2/2018 2:22:00 AM)

    glare, smile, voice, your beautiful eyes. u stood still thre lookng at me.... love, its mysteries, its folly, its dangers,
    its consolations........ thank you dear poet. tony
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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (1/2/2018 2:15:00 AM)

    Jamal, such a lovely write...10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Jazib Kamalvi (1/2/2018 12:18:00 AM)

    Write comment. A good start, Jamal. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 1, 2018



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