Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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It's Me

Rating: 4.9

I am early riser,
Simple man but not wiser,
Try to remain as closer,
With HIS blessings never a looser,

My day starts with HIS prayer,
Dark sides close and open bright layer,
Serving birds feed on the roof top,
Daily routine which continues non-stop,

Mild Sun rays on closed eyes and face,
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Pami Panchal 19 August 2009

it is welll drawn planfor life....10

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Lalvani Rekha 19 August 2009

good and well laid programmme....10

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Sulochna Pandit 14 August 2009

individual's self plan....10

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Raju Rajput 14 August 2009

well laid individual plan....10

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Jigisha Vyas 13 August 2009

very nice poem and educative too....10

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Ratna Patel 01 December 2009

Life seemed to be in haze and smoke Every one preferred to interfere and poke They had all the means to excite and provoke

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Chaul Vania 17 November 2009

I am early riser, Simple man but not wiser, Try to remain as closer, With HIS blessings never a looser,

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G Kandoi 16 November 2009

Mild Sun rays on closed eyes and face, Struggle with thoughts and ready for race,

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Sachin Goswami 19 October 2009

I am early riser, Simple man but not wiser, Try to remain as closer,

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Ashley Paul 19 September 2009

Mild Sun rays on closed eyes and face, Struggle with thoughts and ready for race, Ground ready with new ideas lace,

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