It's Own Cycle Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

It's Own Cycle

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Each day has its on cycle
Joy, unhappiness and full of troubles
Think of bright tomorrow with full of struggle
This may keep you vigilant yet simple

Live today and in present
Life is heavenly sent
Just hand over your control in his hand
Everything may reach to logical end

We have lost faith
Always fearful of death
More importance to wealth
Act hastily and think aftermath

Never get disheartened
Act fast and never pretend
Success may not be in your hand
But yes think tall and have positive trend

You will find difference
Everybody may seek your presence
You will be one of the most sought after
Make others happy and roar in laughter

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2013

Each day has its on cycle Joy, unhappiness and full of troubles

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2013

Muhammad Naveed Ahmed22 minutes ago A poem full of noble thoughts...inspiring! Comment +1 a poem of life

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2013

aradhana verma lovely oneNever get disheartened Act fast and never pretend Success may not be in your hand But yes think tall and have positive trend

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2013

Re: It's own cycle (Score: 1) by NahilaCsemaJ on Monday, June 25,2012 (21: 19: 14) All I would say is that you should read your poem outloud before submitting it. This way you will find if there is any misspellings, or a stanza that does not make sense. Good poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2013

Alan Green 'Guppyman'22 minutes ago the poet says always be true

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2013

?? ? ?? magia.. At the time of our birth starts a specific, individual rhythm of our lives determined life cycles and turning points. Life Cycles of life are divided into three parts. Each part represents a further step and sets the direction for the development of the individual. Life cycles modify the influence of the number Way of Life, which governs them. For me, the line is very reflective, thank you very much.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2013

wow Deanne Mae20 minutes ago your poetry has alot of insite and meaning great writing thank you Comment +1 NOBLE THOUGHTS!

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