It Was Unfair Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

It Was Unfair

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I knew from my heart that it was totally unfair
I still went ahead and did not care
Nothing was left inside the heart such as conscience
No improvement was made with the advancement of science

We still put so much stress on luck and live in primitive stage
We have not gained maturity with the passing of an age
Even blood relation gets strained and receives set back
Fine relations built over years get visible and apparent cracks

We have seen and observed considerable deterioration
Parent and children find no warmth or co- relation
Meeting with friends also create flutter and have no elation
Do we forget that same stage might come for us in rotation?

At any new adventure I do receive condemnation
Set backs come all of sudden from all direction and not in anticipation
It has something to do with unfriendly and unhealthy trend
I have to suffer more even if make good amend

It doesn’t require great skill and good effort
The performance at low level is unsatisfactory and falling short
Life may get boost if one makes sincere approach
He need not go to any school or employ expert coach

We needn’t copy or follow what others are doing?
Surrender to THY only who does all working
Why go aimlessly in search and fool around?
Think positive with all ideas and turn round

Peace may descend on earth with HIS mercy and blessings
Life may prove fruitful with correct thought without stressing
Inner soul search with deep and honest assessing
Success may sure be there even without guessing

I fear nobody and indulge in wrong process
Continuously I work in negative direction without any recess
I take it for granted that I may never leave this world
Give slip to every one and show no warmth with relations cold

I failed to understand the real mission
Had I not to go to His feet for humble submission?
I was pursuing different goal with no meaning
There was no scope for soul purge or cleaning

It is very important to lead life as human being
Person may either be very rich, powerful or king
He has no security for his life and remains mortal
Final you to face the end which is near total

It has to been seen from different angle
We live among civilized world and not in jungle
It has to have some thinking in this regard
You must go in without waiting for any reward

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sangita Rao 16 September 2009

We needn’t copy or follow what others are doing? Surrender to THY who needs no wooing

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Sita Kesri 16 September 2009

Meeting with friends also create no elation Do we forget that same stage may come for us in rotation?

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Ramdulari Sinha 16 September 2009

Any new things I do invite condemnation Set backs come all of sudden and not in anticipation

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Sadia Hussain 16 September 2009

Any new things I do invite condemnation Set backs come all of sudden and not in anticipation

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Edwina K 16 September 2009

Any new things I do invite condemnation Set backs come all of sudden and not in anticipation

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Indani Narayan 16 September 2009

Meeting with friends also create no elation Do we forget that same stage may come for us in rotation?

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Vijay Suwarnkar 16 September 2009

We have seen and observed considerable deterioration Parent to children also find no warmth and co relation

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Sulochna Pandit 16 September 2009

Even blood relation gets strained and receives set back Fine relations built over years get visible and easy cracks

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Raju Rajput 16 September 2009

Life may get boost if made little sincere approach Need not go to any school or employ expert coach

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Jigisha Vyas 16 September 2009

What could I do in difficult situation? This put me in difficult and awkward position

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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