In the bitter cold I can see my breath,
As the snowflakes cool my hot cheeks,
Gently settling in my clothes and hair.
I am headed to the car with a cake.
There'll be a festive party tonight!
My boots glide into the powdery fluff;
And I wonder if it'll ever stop snowing!
The evening sun is setting so very red;
And I can hear the whistle of a bird.
The night will be filled with laughter;
And the evening has scarcely begun.
A white rabbit bounds past the trees;
In a flurry of movement and snow spray.
Drifts now seem to cover all the world.
Though I admired the scene only a moment,
My chocolate cake has been frosted, too!
A lovely presentation! The imagery is precise, and your pace is so nice. I suspect the cake is, too!
Thank you for your kind compliments on my poem (and my cake) .
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
And the frosting Is uncontrollable For its snowing I pulling my gloves Hop into my car Ah it's much cosier. This imagism perfection. Beautifully written. I actually imagined all. Admirations.
Thank you so much for your kind words and admiration. It makes me feel wonderful. Best of wishes.